A CONCERT FOR CHILDREN
The city of Madrid and the television channel Antena 3 have organised an amazing show.
The most popular singer at the moment will perform here. Pignoise, 
ECDL, Hombres G... they will be here.
ECDL, Hombres G... they will be here. The organisers want raise 500 000 euros for poor children. They need this money and our help.
April 3rd will be the day of the concert.
The tickets cost 24 euros. The popularity of this show in the entertainment spread quickly.
It will be a challenge and we hope help many children.
HELP US, PLEASE
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The (community) CITY of Madrid and the TELEVISION channel (televisión) Antena 3 have organised an amazing show.
The most popular singerS at the moment will perform here. Pignoise, ECDL, Hombres G... they will be here.
The organisers want (get) RAISE 500, 000 euros for poor children. They need this money and our help. April 3rd (day) will be the DAY OF THE concert.
The tickets cost 24 euros. The popularity of this show in the entertainment WORLD WILL spread quickly.
It will be a challenge and we (´ll) hope TO help many children.
HELP US, PLEASE